Don't Touch/script - Revision history

Pumaman2o: /* The Script */

2007-01-03T18:09:02Z

The Script

2006-12-06T01:55:16Z

The Script: I voted

2006-12-01T20:14:15Z

Adding voting

2006-12-01T20:05:59Z

The Script: Marked spots with competing lines

2006-12-01T19:56:35Z

Moved instructions down. Lines should be pretty well frozen now that voting is starting

2006-12-01T19:53:17Z

The Script: Adding line from Pumaman2.o (Police Squad was his too)

2006-11-29T23:00:46Z

The Script: Added more lines, cleaned up some of my old ones

2006-11-05T06:28:25Z

The Script

2006-11-03T00:57:13Z

The Script: Added a few lines

2006-10-30T18:57:36Z

The Script

@@ Line 27: / Line 27: @@
 + * (graphic: "Presents")
-:28 "Polic Squad! In color"
+:28 "Police Squad! In color"
 ----

@@ Line 19: / Line 19: @@
 :05 What is?
-'''Competing lines. ''' (We'll attempt to squeez the next three lines in, but if they're too tight, votes will be used to pick the cut.)
+'''Competing lines. ''' (We'll attempt to squeeze all of the next three lines in, but if they're too tight, votes will be used to pick the cut.)
 ----
 * (I.M.E. on screen)
 :23 [TALKOVER to the tune of The Beatles 'I Me Mine'] I me me mine!
-* [00:25] [To the tune of Roxeanne, of course] : “Roxanne, you don’t have to put on the red light ….”
++ * [00:25] [To the tune of Roxeanne, of course] : “Roxanne, you don’t have to put on the red light ….”
-* (graphic: "Presents")
++ * (graphic: "Presents")
 :28 "Polic Squad! In color"
@@ Line 61: / Line 61: @@
 :33  [as Pink shirt Kid] "Maybe I do."
-:33  [as Pink shirt Kid/Sally Struthers] "Sure! We all do."
++ 01:33  [as Pink shirt Kid/Sally Struthers] "Sure! We all do."
 ----
@@ Line 119: / Line 119: @@
 * (baseball explodes)
-:05 [as random kid] Makes me wanna blow stuff up!
++ 04:05 [as random kid] Makes me wanna blow stuff up!
 ----

← Older revision		Revision as of 20:14, 1 December 2006
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		+	== Voting ==
		+	Just add a + next to the lines you want in the finished product, and a - next to the ones you want.
		+	For lines that have no competition (that is, there are no other riffs they'd step on), as long as they have fewer minuses than positives, they'll get included. For competing lines, most positive score wins. One capper, one vote per line. (You can vote for each line written for a given timestamp.)
		+
		+	If you have strong feelings on lines without competition, in case the timing of the final production forces us to remove lines and so we can remove clunkers.
		+
		+	Voting closes December Noon eastern, Sunday, December 17, 2006.
	== The Characters ==		== The Characters ==
	Blasting Cap Man / BCM		Blasting Cap Man / BCM

@@ Line 12: / Line 12: @@
 :05 What is?
 * (I.M.E. on screen)
 :23 [TALKOVER to the tune of The Beatles 'I Me Mine'] I me me mine!
@@ Line 19: / Line 21: @@
 * (graphic: "Presents")
 :28 "Polic Squad! In color"
 * {titlecard: Don't Touch}
@@ Line 43: / Line 48: @@
 :30 This kid's growing his own pot!
 * {SSK: You want your hand blown off?}
 :33  [as Pink shirt Kid] "Maybe I do."
 :33  [as Pink shirt Kid/Sally Struthers] "Sure! We all do."
 * {Even dopier kid: "Hey stop, come on."}
@@ Line 94: / Line 105: @@
 :56 Fast work.
 * {Baseball explodes}
@@ Line 100: / Line 113: @@
 * (baseball explodes)
 :05 [as random kid] Makes me wanna blow stuff up!
 * (BCM pauses while stuff blows up)
@@ Line 115: / Line 129: @@
 *(kids in awe of the explosion)
-:31 [TALKOVER] Before Mythbusters you had to wait for this guy to come around to see stuff get blown up.
+:34 [TALKOVER] Before Mythbusters you had to wait for this guy to come around to see stuff get blown up.
 * (BCM: For different kinds of blasting)

@@ Line 1: / Line 1: @@
 == The Characters ==
 Blasting Cap Man / BCM
@@ Line 169: / Line 159: @@
 :05 Finbar? That's where Troy McClure hangs out.

@@ Line 24: / Line 24: @@
 * (I.M.E. on screen)
 :23 [TALKOVER to the tune of The Beatles 'I Me Mine'] I me me mine!
 * {titlecard: Don't Touch}
@@ Line 31: / Line 34: @@
 :44 Who's the black dick that blows up all the ladies?
 * (sloppy drum fill)
@@ Line 49: / Line 54: @@
 :33  [as Pink shirt Kid] "Maybe I do."
 * {Even dopier kid: "Hey stop, come on."}
@@ Line 56: / Line 62: @@
 * {Kids break into jog behind the car}
-:42 [Excitedly] "It's the blasting cap man!" "Yeah!" "I want a bomb pop!"
+:42 [Excitedly] "It's the blasting cap man!" "Yay!" "I want a bomb pop!" (ad lib other kids chasing ice cream man dialog?)
 * (SSK: in there...)
@@ Line 67: / Line 73: @@
 * (BCM unlocking garage door)
 :10 [TALKOVER] ...Don't these kids have parents?
 * (dorky kid in blue rugby shirt passes by car shaking his head)
@@ Line 76: / Line 85: @@
 * {EDK: "well I miss a lot that goes on at school"}
 :52 [as EDK] "Words make my head hurt"
 * (when music pauses briefly)
@@ Line 82: / Line 94: @@
 * (goofy music continues)
 :15 [TALKOVER] The music has no idea what's going on does it.
 * {Even dopier kid: "All set"}

@@ Line 21: / Line 21: @@
 * {BCM: "Well that's the way we professionals use commercial explosives"}
 :05 What is?
 * {titlecard: Don't Touch}
@@ Line 28: / Line 31: @@
 :44 Who's the black dick that blows up all the ladies?
 * {Kid closing garage}
@@ Line 36: / Line 42: @@
 :19 [as SSK] "...drunk"
 * {SSK: You want your hand blown off?}
@@ Line 48: / Line 57: @@
 :42 [Excitedly] "It's the blasting cap man!" "Yeah!" "I want a bomb pop!"
 * {Kid tosses key to Blasting Cap Man}
 :04 Always give strangers your house keys, kids.
 * {EDK: "well I miss a lot that goes on at school"}
 :52 [as EDK] "Words make my head hurt"
 * {Even dopier kid: "All set"}
@@ Line 63: / Line 90: @@
 :05 That's worse than Barry Bonds.
 * {BCM: "...what a blasting cap could do to a human being."}
 :31 [as BCM] "If they were a mannequin."
 * {05:34 BCM drops hat}
@@ Line 81: / Line 135: @@
 :44 [TALKOVER] "...are the luckiest people in the world"
 * {Credits}

← Older revision		Revision as of 18:57, 30 October 2006
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	{05:34 BCM drops hat}		{05:34 BCM drops hat}
		+
		+	[TALKOVER] "How does this klutz still have all his fingers?"

	{BCM: "...road jobs..."}		{BCM: "...road jobs..."}