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GersonK: /* =The Shooting Script */

2007-01-30T02:50:07Z

=The Shooting Script

GersonK: /* The Film */

2007-01-30T02:47:38Z

The Film

GersonK: /* The Script (part II) */

2007-01-29T00:20:33Z

The Script (part II)

GersonK: /* The Script (Part IV) */

2007-01-29T00:10:42Z

The Script (Part IV)

Pumaman2o: /* The Script (Part I) */

2007-01-27T02:19:45Z

The Script (Part I)

Pumaman2o: /* The Script (Part I) */

2007-01-27T02:18:18Z

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GersonK: /* The Script (Part I) */

2007-01-26T05:05:55Z

The Script (Part I)

GersonK: /* The Script (Part I) */

2007-01-26T02:40:38Z

The Script (Part I)

Pumaman2o: /* The Script (Part I) */

2007-01-26T02:23:08Z

The Script (Part I)

GersonK: /* The Script (Part I) */

2007-01-25T23:15:38Z

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-===The Shooting Script==
+==The Shooting Script==
 Here's the 'finalized' script with initial line assignments. Trading is acceptable, but try to avoid getting too many lines in a row. NOTE: We need to vote on the lines at 12:05.
-[[/Script]]
+[[WikiMsting/Episode 2/Script | Script]]
 ===The Script (Part I)===

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	--[[User:GersonK\|GersonK]] 01:38, 4 January 2007 (EST)		--[[User:GersonK\|GersonK]] 01:38, 4 January 2007 (EST)

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		+	===The Shooting Script==
		+	Here's the 'finalized' script with initial line assignments. Trading is acceptable, but try to avoid getting too many lines in a row. NOTE: We need to vote on the lines at 12:05.
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		+	[[/Script]]

	===The Script (Part I)===		===The Script (Part I)===

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 One of two
-:04 {Bulbous double coffee pot - the first one} Tom Servo's cousin! --GersonK 00:32, 15 January 2007 (EST)
++5:04 {Bulbous double coffee pot - the first one} Tom Servo's cousin! --GersonK 00:32, 15 January 2007 (EST)
 :04 (..the same thing in a different way) Like Mexican laborers --Jazzsoda 21 Jan
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 There was much debate and rewriting here. Rather than taking any of the reactions as retractions, I've in fact taken the liberty of hacking Yibble's somewhat retracted first attempt here to something less wordy.
-I think we can handle one out of the first four. The 5:29 line may or may not work wiith the others, so we'll use it it gets high marks or the winning line doesn't step on it.
+I think we can handle one out of the first four. The 5:29 line may or may not work with the others, so we'll use it it gets high marks or the winning line doesn't step on it.
 :24 {"Free from all remembrances of that last pot of coffee"} 'Eternal Sunshine of the Spotless Coffeemaker'!"--YibbleGuy 19:58, 8 January 2007 (EST)
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 One out of two
-:39 ("Water.") "Water sir?" (Are tere stage directions fo this?)
+:39 ("Water.") "Water sir?" (Are there stage directions fo this?)
 * Think along the lines of in Prince of Space when Krankor would send his men to find prince of space and they'd respond "Prince of space sir?" - Matteus
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 One of two
-:45 {"One level CBI measure per cup."} "Followed by 'CBI: Miami', on most of
+:45 {"One level CBI measure per cup."} "Followed by 'CBI: Miami', on most of these CBS stations."--YibbleGuy 18:23, 9 January 2007 (EST)
-these CBS stations."--YibbleGuy 18:23, 9 January 2007 (EST)
+:46 (one level CBI measure) That’s Coffee Burn Index, for those of you playing at home --Jazzsoda 21 Jan
 * maybe if the lines were shortened, "Followed by 'CBI Miami'" and "That stands for Coffee Burn Index" - Matteus

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 [its so so, Gerson ...  Pumaman2.o]
-:07 (Same as above) "but what about all that international crap you showed us earlier?" --Matteus 14 Jan
++ 10:07 (Same as above) "but what about all that international crap you showed us earlier?" --Matteus 14 Jan
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 :51 (of our pause at noon) Because coffee is chock full of essential nutrients to help paws and hooves grow. --Jazzsoda 21 Jan
-:54 ("A world that often forgets to stop") "because they're all high on caffeine" --Matteus 14 Jan
++ 11:54 ("A world that often forgets to stop") "because they're all high on caffeine" --Matteus 14 Jan
 :54 {"A world that often forgets to stop"} "... because Anthony Newley wants to get off."--YibbleGuy 19:37, 15 January 2007 (EST)

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 + 00:37 {woman walks down the stairs to the beat of the jazzy music} "Everyone should have Brian Setzer around to play your theme music" ---- Pumaman2o {rewritten riff]
-*******************
+'''-------'''
 *Wasn't trying to make a big issue about this, but the musician's name is [http://www.briansetzer.com/ Setzer]. Or are you looking to do a play on seltzer? --[[User:GersonK|GersonK]] 21:40, 25 January 2007 (EST)
 The next three ''should'' work, as long as we have more than one riffer

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 *I think all three could fit. It could play out something like this
 NARR.: "Is this coffee?"
 : "Umm, yes?"
 : "I vote liquid shit"
 NARR.: "No!"
 : "OK. Wait, what?"
 NARR.: "This is coffee"
 : "huhnh?"
 : "I thought Pam Grier was Coffy" -Matteus
 *I like Matteus' solution, with or without my line. --Jazz
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	+ 00:37 [As soon as woman's foot appears] HONEY WEST! --GersonK 13:51, 13 January 2007 (EST)		+ 00:37 [As soon as woman's foot appears] HONEY WEST! --GersonK 13:51, 13 January 2007 (EST)

−	+ 00:37 {woman walks down the stairs to the beat of the jazzy music} "Everyone should have Brian ~~Setzer~~ around to play your theme music" ---- Pumaman2o {rewritten riff]	+	+ 00:37 {woman walks down the stairs to the beat of the jazzy music} "Everyone should have Brian Setlzer around to play your theme music" ---- Pumaman2o {rewritten riff]